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There is nothing wrong with using the word said in dialog. Be careful not to treat the word said as a word to be avoided. Well written dialog should never rely on tags such as the ones below, but should convey its own attitude. When using words instead of said, be sure you utilize them properly. For example, the following sentence does not use said:
"I hate you," spat Bob in disgust.
This sentence uses said:
"I hate you," said Bob as he clenched his fists. His lips snarled with rage as he stormed out the room, vowing never to return.
Here is another example where said works just fine:
"Do have some more gravy, Bob," said Darla, spooning it out herself.
For dialog to be effective it must appear to be realistic. The person reading your story must believe that your characters actually talk this way. You should use dialog to reveal insights into characters, set the mood, and even to clarify plot points. I was once told that when writing dialog, to think of it as action. Use dialog to make something happen.

Use the list below carefully and remember that there is nothing wrong with using the word said in dialog.


accused clucked gulped pointed out smirked
acknowledged coaxed gurgled pondered snapped
added commanded praised snarled
addressed commented hinted prayed sneered
admitted complained hissed proclaimed sneezed
advised conceded hollered promised snickered
affirmed concluded hypothesized proposed sniffed
agreed confessed protested sniffled
announced confided imitated put in snorted
answered congratulated implied puzzled sobbed
approved continued informed speculated
argued convinced inquired quavered spoke
asked corrected insisted queried sputtered
asserted coughed interjected questioned squeaked
assured cried interrupted quipped stammered
avowed croaked quoted started
crowed jeered stated
babbled jested ranted stormed
barked dared joked reasoned stuttered
bawled decided reassured suggested
beamed declared laughed recalled surmised
began demanded lied reckoned taunted
begged denied lisped related teased
bellowed described remarked tempted
bet disagreed maintained remembered tested
bleated disclosed marveled reminded theorized
blurted divulged mentioned repeated threatened
boasted doubted mimicked replied told
boomed drawled moaned reported trilled
bragged mumbled requested urged
broke in echoed murmured responded uttered
bubbled ended mused retorted volunteered
bugged exclaimed muttered revealed vowed
burst out explained roared
called finished nagged wailed
cautioned fretted nodded sang warned
chatted noted sassed went on
chattered gasped objected screamed wept
cheered gibed observed scoffed whimpered
chided giggled offered scolded whined
chimed in greeted ordered shot whispered
choked groaned shouted wondered
chortled growled panted shrieked worried
chorused grunted piped shrilled
chuckled grumbled pleaded sighed yawned
claimed guessed pled smiled yakked

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