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214 Words to use instead of Said
214 Words to use instead of Said
There is nothing wrong with using the word said in dialog. Be careful not to treat the word said as a word to be avoided. Well written dialog should never rely on tags such as the ones below, but should convey its own attitude. When using words instead of said, be sure you utilize them properly. For example, the following sentence does not use said:
"I hate you," spat Bob in disgust.
This sentence uses said:
"I hate you," said Bob as he clenched his fists. His lips snarled with rage as he stormed out the room, vowing never to return.
Here is another example where said works just fine:
"Do have some more gravy, Bob," said Darla, spooning it out herself.
For dialog to be effective it must appear to be realistic. The person reading your story must believe that your characters actually talk this way. You should use dialog to reveal insights into characters, set the mood, and even to clarify plot points. I was once told that when writing dialog, to think of it as action. Use dialog to make something happen.
Use the list below carefully and remember that there is nothing wrong with using the word said in dialog.
| accused | clucked | gulped | pointed out | smirked |
| acknowledged | coaxed | gurgled | pondered | snapped |
| added | commanded | praised | snarled | |
| addressed | commented | hinted | prayed | sneered |
| admitted | complained | hissed | proclaimed | sneezed |
| advised | conceded | hollered | promised | snickered |
| affirmed | concluded | hypothesized | proposed | sniffed |
| agreed | confessed | protested | sniffled | |
| announced | confided | imitated | put in | snorted |
| answered | congratulated | implied | puzzled | sobbed |
| approved | continued | informed | speculated | |
| argued | convinced | inquired | quavered | spoke |
| asked | corrected | insisted | queried | sputtered |
| asserted | coughed | interjected | questioned | squeaked |
| assured | cried | interrupted | quipped | stammered |
| avowed | croaked | quoted | started | |
| crowed | jeered | stated | ||
| babbled | jested | ranted | stormed | |
| barked | dared | joked | reasoned | stuttered |
| bawled | decided | reassured | suggested | |
| beamed | declared | laughed | recalled | surmised |
| began | demanded | lied | reckoned | taunted |
| begged | denied | lisped | related | teased |
| bellowed | described | remarked | tempted | |
| bet | disagreed | maintained | remembered | tested |
| bleated | disclosed | marveled | reminded | theorized |
| blurted | divulged | mentioned | repeated | threatened |
| boasted | doubted | mimicked | replied | told |
| boomed | drawled | moaned | reported | trilled |
| bragged | mumbled | requested | urged | |
| broke in | echoed | murmured | responded | uttered |
| bubbled | ended | mused | retorted | volunteered |
| bugged | exclaimed | muttered | revealed | vowed |
| burst out | explained | roared | ||
| called | finished | nagged | wailed | |
| cautioned | fretted | nodded | sang | warned |
| chatted | noted | sassed | went on | |
| chattered | gasped | objected | screamed | wept |
| cheered | gibed | observed | scoffed | whimpered |
| chided | giggled | offered | scolded | whined |
| chimed in | greeted | ordered | shot | whispered |
| choked | groaned | shouted | wondered | |
| chortled | growled | panted | shrieked | worried |
| chorused | grunted | piped | shrilled | |
| chuckled | grumbled | pleaded | sighed | yawned |
| claimed | guessed | pled | smiled | yakked |
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